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« Reply #5: February 26, 2010, 10:25:41 pm »

Jared grunted.  “Poor bastard.”
“Exactly!  Exactly.”

Okay, I got a chuckle out of that.

Overall a bit quick, but I could still follow it.  Something this dense in dialogue might be double-spaced, to give the reader breathing room.

I really enjoyed Marcus' neurosis. Smiley


"I've seen knights in armor panic at the first hint of battle.  And I've seen the lowliest unarmed squire pull a spear from his own body to defend a dying horse." - Kevin Costner as Robin of Loxley, Robin Hood; Prince of Thieves.

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